Sunday, 10 May 2015

Writing Game #1

When I’m in bad mood
I eat a lot of food
I eat and eat
vegetables and meat
For dessert I eat cake
because I love to bake

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  2. I know the feeling, but I'm not sure if I like it or not - I like the eating and baking part though :)

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  3. Haha, i know the feeling. It actually reminds me of the 'cake to bake'-song that was the latvian eurovision song in 2014. hahah
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HeLSBtzAmkE

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  4. WHY did no one tell me that song existed?! :D

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  5. I really know the feeling too. A very exciting poem with good rhymes.

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  6. Creative sabisan, I'm in love with poem!

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  7. Nice, simple and with a relateable theme ;)

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  8. That's so relatable! Cake is life.

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  9. This is poetry in its sincerest, most perfect form. I salute you, and I can't comprehend why you're not a renowned and critically-acclaimed writer yet.

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