Paula slammed the
door and hurried to the bus stop. When the bus drove past her, she decided to
run to the city centre. She made it and
marched to McDonald's. She strutted into McDonald's, stood in line and
was handed her food. After receiving her food, she sat down at a table and
stuffed herself. She freezed, however, when se noticed that a hair was lying in
her bag of French fries.
Paula doesn't exactly strike me as a nice person for some reason...
ReplyDeleteI like the was you have written it :D
I like how her mood is very clear to the reader.
ReplyDeleteHaha, when you have a craving...! :D
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