Sunday, 10 May 2015

Paula slammed the door and hurried to the bus stop. When the bus drove past her, she decided to run to the city centre. She made it and  marched to McDonald's. She strutted into McDonald's, stood in line and was handed her food. After receiving her food, she sat down at a table and stuffed herself. She freezed, however, when se noticed that a hair was lying in her bag of French fries. 

3 comments:

  1. Paula doesn't exactly strike me as a nice person for some reason...
    I like the was you have written it :D

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  2. I like how her mood is very clear to the reader.

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  3. Haha, when you have a craving...! :D

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