Poem;
I got a
bad feeling
Overseen
feeling
No need
for this feeling
Bad
timing with this feeling
Don't
look at me with that feeling
Omg, 2min
left with this feeling
I will
survive with this feeling
I know I
will thrive with this feeling
Do you
know me, as I know myself with this feeling
30 sek
left with this feeling
It wasn't
that bad with this feeling
Bye bye
feeling…
Nice poem with epiphora
ReplyDeleteYeah, it gives it a good rhythm
DeleteI know that feeling! Nice ending too
ReplyDeleteThank you
DeleteAlmost a song, with that feeling....
ReplyDeleteHaha this gonna be on my new mixtape
DeleteGreat structure! The epiphora works well, and at the same time you manage to find a coherent plot-line.
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