Sunday, 10 May 2015

My poem from our first writing game:

Write a poem in five minutes:

Write a poem
He said
You have five minutes
He said
You can´t write a poem
in five minutes
Two minutes left
He said
A clock on the whiteboard
It’s stressing me out
Time's up
And now
I’m done

He said

By Lærke 

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9 comments:

  1. Unknown10 May 2015 at 07:13

    and this is not creative? ;) Like the part, "he said", because it gives the poem some structure.

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  2. Den.Vise.Waakii10 May 2015 at 07:23

    haha I know that feeling. Creative way to put in content.

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  3. Unknown10 May 2015 at 09:12

    This poem reminds me of my own poem. I guess I am not the only one left with this feeling. We're really not that creative in 1.u hahah

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  4. Unknown10 May 2015 at 09:14

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  5. Unknown10 May 2015 at 09:15

    Nice flow

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  6. Christine10 May 2015 at 09:24

    The repetition of 'he said' gives the poem a nice flow!
    I also find the end quite good.

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  7. Nicoline10 May 2015 at 10:52

    I really like how you structured this poem.

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  8. Unknown10 May 2015 at 11:09

    A really nice poem with a structure, which creates a main thread through the poem.

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  9. Hawkins10 May 2015 at 12:11

    I like how you end it with "he said" as if I am in charge of whether the poem is done or not ;)

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